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Re: Essence
Time is a vulture, Circling above. You are chained to it, And cannot break free... No matter how hard you try. Someday, as the sun sets, You will fall to ...
Jul 25, 2009 -
Re: The Never Ending Story...
. . . spontaneously vomited blue ducks who just happened to know the secret of . . . ...The Secret Society where everyone's names are numbers and everyone studies the ...
Jul 17, 2009 -
Re: How to critique your own work
Thanks everyone, glad it was helpful; reading all those books about writing has really paid off, I'v learned a ton. :D
Jul 12, 2009 -
Re: The Consequences of Betrayal
This is probably the first poem I'v seen on this site with real potential... it flows well... has that "gut emotional appeal" everyone is drawn to... "shows", dosn't "tell"... has ...
Jul 12, 2009 -
Re: Corrupt a Wish 2
Granted, but the aliens are abducting your manuscripts when you aren't looking. :shock: Hmm...Lets see... *evil laugh*.... Ahem *clears throat*, I wish... I wish I had a million evil minions, ...
Jul 12, 2009 -
Re: The Never Ending Story...
...made a living out of disembowling rubber clocks at the Rubber Clock Meauseam, which...
Jul 12, 2009 -
Re: Creativity contest
Hey you, all you rascally young chickens and wise old llamas... I got a game for you! Its an inventive sort of game that makes your brain go "Boom!" Heres ...
Jul 12, 2009 -
Re: How to critique your own work
Fellows, 8) As any writer knows, critiquing your own work can be a real pain. I mean, how are we supposed to know what the readers would think? You can ...
Jul 12, 2009 -
Re: Greetings From Planet Random (I'm New...Hi!)
LOL!!! *sproing!!" :smt031 Hi there interesting person! I'm random too! and homeschooled! and I love music... and Piano... And Video games... And I have irritating siblings! Yay! *Adds to friends* ...
Jul 8, 2009 -
Re: Any Contemporary Christian Music Fans out there?
Wow, so many switchfoot fans! I love that band! "On Fire" is my personal favorite, its so emotional, and original, and... beautiful! I love all their other songs too though!! ...
Jul 2, 2009 -
Re: Spirit: Stallion of the Cimarron
Oh yeah, the soundtrack is amazing! :D
Jul 2, 2009 -
Re: Removed by Author
Congratulations, endless secrets, you have created the first story I have read on this site with nothing to criticize. Really, this is pretty much perfect! Its got gut emotional appeal ...
Jul 2, 2009 -
Re: Reach out and touch... some Newbie's hand...
Hey, welcome to YWS. You sound like an interesting person, and your novel sounds interesting, too. Well, here are three main rules you'll have to remember: 1. The 2:1 ratio. ...
Jul 2, 2009 -
Re: Reach out and touch... some Newbie's hand...
Snoink dear, he said clock work mask, not maze. *reaches out and pokes the newb* Why hello there DFR! (Your username is long, give me a break.) mhmm got the ...
Jul 2, 2009 -
Re: Reach out and touch... some Newbie's hand...
Hi Dradian! I'm June, welcome to YWS! Stella and Colleen have pointed out some important things for you to pay attention to, so I'll just ramble about some stuff instead! ...
Jul 2, 2009
